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You'll Be There


Fall down
Get up
Either way
You'll be there

Why
Who knows?
Who cares?
Doesn't matter

'cause you'll be there

Kiss me
Kiss you
Shut up
Talk

What does it matter?
You'll be there

Your face
A disgrace
My face
... Lost my place

I love you
You love me
I hate you
You say
We're meant to be

No matter what
You'll be there
To pick up the pieces
Again and again

Fall after fall
Hurt after hurt
Word after word
You'll be there
This is a poem that I wrote a long time ago I just never got the chance to post so I hope you enjoy and please comment
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LostKitten Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2010  Hobbyist
Your literature has been featured in this month's Unseen Literature! :D
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cristalia09usagi Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2010  Student Writer
YAY thank you
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xXx-Leon-xXx Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2010
all i will say is AWESOME!
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cristalia09usagi Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2010  Student Writer
thank you so much
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Obsidian-Nightfall Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2010  Student Writer
Oohh, i like this snappy, almost musical quality, well done...
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cristalia09usagi Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2010  Student Writer
thank you very much
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Diedelmon Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Good poem. Congratulations.
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cristalia09usagi Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2010  Student Writer
thankyou but congratulation on what may i ask ??
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Diedelmon Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
On writing it, would be a great start. haha
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cristalia09usagi Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2010  Student Writer
im sorry but i dont understand what you mean Writing it ??? LOL
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Diedelmon Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Well. We don't see a lot of well written art these days. So when someone is willing to do just that, we might as well give our props. Who knows when we'll be able to see poetry rising again here. That's what I meant.
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cristalia09usagi Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2010  Student Writer
oh thank you poetry takes time and thoughts its great to just express it :D
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Diedelmon Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
=)
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SuicideSunday Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2010
it is beautiful <3
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cristalia09usagi Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2010  Student Writer
thankyou
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SuicideSunday Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2010
You're welcome =)
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cristalia09usagi Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2010  Student Writer
:P
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Erasable-CoLoRs Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2010  Hobbyist
It's great poetry c:
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cristalia09usagi Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2010  Student Writer
thankyou very much
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Erasable-CoLoRs Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2010  Hobbyist
c:
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:iconcristalia09usagi:
cristalia09usagi Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2010  Student Writer
:D
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Erasable-CoLoRs Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2010  Hobbyist
c:
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ZacOfTheZombies Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Very well writen, you show great skill at creating a moment. You've got a watcher. :P
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cristalia09usagi Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2010  Student Writer
thank you im now extremely happy
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Aroline Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
I like. It rhymes. <3
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cristalia09usagi Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2009  Student Writer
thank you very much :)
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Aroline Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
You are welcome! Keep on writing!
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cristalia09usagi Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2009  Student Writer
thanks i sure will :)
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bohemianlor Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
beautiful...
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cristalia09usagi Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2009  Student Writer
thankyou
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camilah Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2009
Cool poem:heart:
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cristalia09usagi Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2009  Student Writer
thankyou
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camilah Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2009
Welcome.
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cristalia09usagi Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2009  Student Writer
:)
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camilah Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2009
:hug:
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